Three some just composed please read and rate criticize if you may?

I won't go quite as far as lano, but I do suggest you make your posts one at a time unless they are very short and are tied together somehow. I will read and comment on the first one: Sometimes writers and poets will use allusive or allegorical themes and language in order to make a point. In your case, I think it is more nonsensical than allegorical. Lines 6 & 14 do not work for me. The syntax is all out-of-whack. The rhythm is faulty through most of the poem, but it especially falters in lines 6,10,17 and 18. In the last line "fellow citizens" seems really out of place. My friend, it seems that you are more interested in "cranking them out" than you are in quality. You probably out to write one-tenth as much and work ten times harder at what you write. Your intentions are good, now work on the craft!